Mixtape - Robophobia

To answer Sam Jackson's question of why is America so Robophobic.

If you listen to Gundamn@MAHQ you'll probably like this page even more. 

Be sure to check out my deviantart for more stuff.

Mixtape - A cunning linguist vs a master debater

Oy. I'm totally a day late and a dollar short on Mixtape aren't I? ...Even though Mixtape updates on Fridays. Not even colored or anything. Well, my creative energies lately have been drained. Since mid October I haven't been writing or drawing not to my usual standards anyway. This comic here has been drawn since early October but I felt it might have been too risque but after talking with some people who felt it was funny I decided to put it up as this week's Mixtape page. There won't be a volume collection for this month since there was only what... 2 pages including this one? If there's a normal amount of pages for next month I'll add these to that month's volume collection. I might even color this one for that collection.

Again, I'm sorry for doing much less than I thought I would for this month. Hopefully my mind gets back in the swing of things again and I can put out pages and write those comic scripts again. As a sort of bonus because I feel I should add something extra here's a gallery of my pencil sketches which contain a bunch which I didn't make public for whatever reasons. These are ONLY available for people to view that aren't me via this link. http://sta.sh/21qg8736reti

Also remember check out my deviantart for more stuff. Like my recent Street Fighter stuff.

Mixtape - Hi Hugh! That's a car?

So, this one was pulled out of nowhere. (Here's a hint they ALL are) The car is a Nissan GT-R. I had to use tons of references for drawing it. The hippo is a soldier looking for Captain America as a duck. Yeah, and Sting the wrestler is helping him. (Leave a comment if you want to know what that's all about). Check out MORE stuff like profiles and commission info on my deviantart

Mixtape Volume 1

Did you miss any of the pages during Mixtape's first month? Well, here are all the pages collected for you! Remember Mixtape is the RANDOM webcomic. So, there is no story and sometimes even panels on the same page have nothing to do with each other! So welcome to the craziness, and be sure to check out my deviantart or even my pixiv for more STUFF. ...I also take commissions $5 for full color drawing. This has more info.

Mixtape - How much did you take?

But what did you expect when you get your acid for free?

Go to my deviantart for more stuff. Also be on the lookout Saturday for a collection of the first month's pages of Mixtape! You know in case you missed any... because you have a life. No no... I get it. You can't be bothered to read random crap. ...I thought we were friends.

BONUS Mixtape - The Power of...!

I told you I'd put up a bonus page. Now to focus on writing again... and then miss another week and then put two more pages... Just kidding.

Visit my deviantart for more stuff like artwork I actually put effort in and to learn more about the stuff I do. http://fighterxaos.deviantart.com

Mixtape - The Answer to Everything

It's a reference to the OLD Mixtape which in itself is a reference to the Simpsons. ...Or so I hear.

Check out my deviantart for more STUFF http://fighterxaos.deviantart.com

Also to make up for no Mixtape last week, because I was writing (and still am writing) my new "comic comic" Gorillas I have a bonus Mixtape for tomorrow.

Webcomic: Mixtape - jerks

Some people are just jerks. 

Follow me on deviantart for more comic related stuff, and sketches, and character profiles, and art I actually put more effort in since there's no deadline. http://fighterxaos.deviantart.com Also check out my let's play group TheGameRiffers. There's a podcast I started (but only produce) called the Ikaricast

Webcomic: Mixtape debuts!

Hello everyone it's your BI VP here Jeremias with something to debut for you guys. I've been talking with some of the other people that work with and for TheBrokenInfinite, especially EIC Frankie and I've decided to work on a weekly webcomic. (I'm shooting for weekly) The plan is to release at least one page a week and every month have those pages collected and put that collection up here using issuu.com.

On top of drawing and writing these little webcomic pages I also happen to be writing two comics as well. As you can see from the comic page there's a reason I'm becoming a pro at writing but not drawing, well, for now at least perhaps all the practice will boost my skill. Basically if my wonky art isn't to your liking I hope you can still enjoy the comedy.

Which brings me to what Mixtape is. Mixtape is a comic about randomness. Every page is just stuff happening. This page happens to have the whole page be about one thing, but sometimes even panel to panel things can be completely unrelated and random. It's basically my way of cooling off from writing stories by having a comic where I do anything I want. I started it when I was 15 and... you CAN look for those old pencil comics if you search hard enough, or you can ask me. But, eh, let's forget about those eh? Here's the debut webcomic page:

If you want to know things like "is this how crappy your normal stuff looks like?" "do the characters have names?" "just what are that red-head's measurements?" Then go here: http://fighterxaos.deviantart.com and check out character profiles and the like. If you're on deviantart go ahead and add me to your watch list too. I do commissions too, $5 for a full color character drawing.

Free Comic: THE MAGNIFICENT BLACK MAGE #0

  As we continue our 1st year celebration, here is the reissue of The Magnificent Black Mage by our own Darryll B. Carter.


   Join Daniel Christianson as he discovers the powers dormant within him and stands against a darkness that threatens to consume Philadelphia.

Read it below.

Open publication - Free publishing

Free Comic: SCREW PHILLIPS # 1

In honor of  Broken Infinite's 1st Anniversary, here is the 1st issue of Screw Phillips, Broken Infinite's first creator owned title. This will become a regular fixture here in Broken Infinite.

FOR MATURE READERS (18 years old or older) ONLY:

SCREW PHILLIPS #1 
by Jake Estrada

Open publication - Free publishing - More graphic novel

Comic News: Quantum & Woody Go Weekly ... on IGN

IGN Presents QUANTUM AND WOODY WEEKLY - A New Webcomic by JAMES ASMUS & TY TEMPLETON!

 

Beginning today, the world's worst superhero team are hitting the interwebs with everything they've got!

 

Before Quantum and Woody #1 comes careening into comic shops everywhere on July 10th, Valiant is teaming up with the authoritative voice in gaming and entertainment for IGN Presents Quantum and Woody Weekly – an exclusive, six-part webcomic by Quantum and Woody's own James Asmus(Thief of Thieves, Gambit, The End Times of Bram & Ben) and Eisner Award-winning artist Ty Templeton (Ultimate Spider-Man Adventures, Ty Templeton's Art Land)!

 

"Valiant has delivered nothing but quality since they launched last summer, so I’m proud and honored to partner with them to debut Quantum and Woody Weekly exclusively on IGN," said IGN Senior Editor Joey Esposito. "We’re excited to help Valiant’s expansion into web comics, as well as explore IGN Comics as a platform for original comic book content. Plus, you know, goats!”

 

"We have a seriously cool new series percolating with Quantum and Woody, but before it kicks off in July, our friends at IGN were kind (and crazy) enough to let James Asmus and Ty Templeton bring the hilarity of the world's worst superhero team to their readers on a weekly basis," said Quantum and Woody Editor Jody LeHeup. "James and Ty have done their darnedest to deliver some special stuff for old fans of Q&W and new readers alike, so rejoice y'all – Quantum and Woody are back a bit early and in a whole new way."

 

Once upon a time, Eric and Woody Henderson were inseparable. Adopted brothers. Best friends. Brilliant minds. Years later, they are estranged siblings, petty rivals, and washed-up failures. But when their father’s murder leads them into the throes of a life-altering scientific accident, Eric and Woody will find themselves with a whole new purpose – and a perfectly legitimate reason to wear costumes and fight crime. Go big or go home, folks! Quantum and Woody are coming...and the zeitgeist-shredding exploitation stunt comic you demanded is here at last.  (And, yes, there will be a goat too. Eventually.)

 

Now, in the lead-up to Quantum and Woody's milestone first issue this July, get in on the ground floor of the adventures of the Valiant Universe's ineptly aspiring heroes with a new installment of IGN Presents Quantum and Woody Weekly every Wednesday! What are the origins of Woody and Eric's witty repartee? Who looks better in blue? And what exactly is the deal with that goat anyway?

 

Find out the answers to none of these pressing questions and more each week  – only at IGN! Then the misguided action-adventure blowout of the summer continues on July 10th in Quantum and Woody #1- the FIRST ISSUE of Valiant's next ongoing monthly series by James Asmus and Tom Fowler, and featuring a standard cover by Ryan Sook, a Pullbox Exclusive Variant by Marcos Martin for customers who pre-order with the their local retailer, an incentive variant by Andrew Robinson, and an interactive QR Voice Variant by Tom Fowler (with real talking goat action)!

 

But don't take our word for it – read the first precedent-setting installment of IGN Presents Quantum and Woody Weekly right now, only at IGN!

Special Preview: Screw Phillips

Here is a special preview of the upcoming BI title, Screw Phillips by our very own Jake Estrada.

THIS IS FOR AGES 18 & OLDER!!!

Open publication - Free publishing - More comic book

Comic Preview: Thrillbent Gives Us New Title With PAX ARENA

  Just tweeted on the Thrillbent official twitter, Thrillbent gave us a preview of an upcoming title called Pax Arena. The Title's creative team are MAST, Geoffo and Yves Balak.


You can look at the new preview of  PAX ARENA.

Under the Net # 22

Under the Net with Jake Estrada

Unicorn soup

Welcome to the 22nd edition of Under the Net.  

I will be rating the elements of the book on a scale of one through five.

One is poor, two is mediocre, three is fair, four is good, and five is excellent.

Today, I am doing a review of a web comic series that is basically about two guys writing and drawing about how they feel about current events around the world, and I must say it is quite good. The series is by Jack Janney and Jim Pezzetti.

The Art

The art is black and white. It is done nicely, has a great mixture of humor and movement and is very east to read.

ART: 4 STARS

The Writing

The writing is very good as well. I enjoyed it a lot. I love the tone of the writing because each page is a different story that has to do with gaming or some sort of genre. Sometimes the writing has dark humor. For example, a guy is writing a story, and he is working hard. When he is happy, he has a cat in his hands, and he is naked and the ladies walk in to see this. In one story, a baby and a man finally head into work to tell his boss to see the other guy. There are subjects about people having to use their real name and address if they were gamers, and the other player talks about how much of a nightmare this would be because it would bring out all the weirdoes and nerds doing stupid things like appearing to make out with women, or one standing over a person’s face in victory.

WRITING: 4 STARS

Originality

 The art was nice, the writing was great, and there are several stories in the book. The originality to the series is great because you never know what you will get on any given update.  

ORIGINALITY: 3 STARS

The Pros

The book has great humor, great writing, and great art.

The Cons

The only con is that the web comic doesn’t have a set storyline.

Cut the Cord. Enjoy!

My Final Word

If you want something funny, something to read and have a little fun, then this is the series for you because you will laugh. J

The comic updates here every Thursday:

http://www.unicorn-soup.com/

Enjoy folks!

Jake Estrada

Email me at estradajake@yahoo.com for website suggestions. Thanks.

Jake Estrada is a published author who holds degrees in Multimedia Design and Criminal Justice. He is a father to three wonderful children and married to his beautiful wife, Beth. You can find his comics at http://graphicly.com/estrada-media and other fine online stores.

Robot God Akamatsu webcomic review

It's Jeremias back with another review! This time I'm taking a look at the webcomic Robot God Akamatsu. Written by James Biggie with art by Frankie B. Washington, Robot God Akamatsu is a webcomic that is a throwback to classic super robot anime series complete with retro manga-like art style.

Review by Jeremias de Leon

Story

The story of Robot God Akamatsu is, like, the classic series it's inspired by it's about a robot saving humanity from evil giant monsters. Of course there's more plot to it than that. An inter-dimensional gate opens which lets a monster loose and destroys Boston. During this the main character Jin, is put into a coma for a year and during that year scientists are hard at work in making sure Jin and two other people named Adele Angavi and Connor Aleju. On top of the story on Earth with these people there's also a plot about where the robot comes from and the evil people invading earth from there. It seems there's more to the "Robot God" than people think. There's a lot building up here, so there's more content here than just robots smashing evil monsters. Though to be honest I would be just fine with that.

Art

The art by Frankie B. Washington is quite something. It's definitely inspired by classic giant robot anime but it doesn't feel at all like it's trying to rip them off, it still looks like it's a unique style that belongs to him and not "Go Nagai clone #301", The black and white pages are quite nice with this style of comic in a way it lets the details stand out more. Your eyes get drawn to peoples features and the designs of the machines. Robot God Akamatsu itself looks like a giant robot from the 70s and since that seems to the point the design has done it's job.

All in all it's a really cool, stylish art style that leaves an impression

Characters

The characters in this comic are pretty quirky, and that's a good thing. None of them seem like they're bland or 2 dimensional which is can be uncommon in these types of stories. The main character Jin has plenty going on for him, he seems to be a bit aloof but also has a sense of humor. The other pilots are something as well, Adele is a strong no non-sense woman and Connor is a laid back guy but he also seems to have a work ethic as well, he isn't so laid back to the point of being incompetent.

Jin's father is a scientist but unlike most scientists shown in media isn't just some stuffy lab-coat, although he does always wear one. He shows to care for his son a lot and even shows that he, too has a sense of humor. The other characters although not shown too much do clearly show they're unique characters Frankie the other scientist who is close to his Jin and his father's friend is shown to be a kindhearted man and Jackie one of the mechanics/engineers is pretty distinct with his New Yorker/Bostonian/Irish(???) accent.

Verdict

Robot God Akamatsu is an on-going webcomic that is a really fun read. It's building up to something great, the art style is great to look at, and the action is fantastic. If you're a fan of mecha like I am there really is no reason to not read this. I had a blast going through the chapters. It's a rocket punch to boredom go and read this right now you will not be disappointed.

Robot God Akamatsu gets an emphatic 9 out of 10.

You can read Robot God Akamatsu here http://robotgodakamatsu.blogspot.com/

If you feel like knowing more about my thoughts on comics, games, anime and the like follow me on twitter @ikariradio and listen to my podcast the Ikaricast, which is on iTunes.

webcomic review Wayward Sons

Hi faithful and new readers of TheBrokenInfinite. Jeremias here, and I'm back with another webcomic review. This time we're looking at Wayward Sons, a science fiction comic written by Benny R. Powell.   Well, this one is quite big, so this review is going to be based on what I've read which were the first five issues.

Review by Jeremias de Leon


Story


The main premise of the story are that a race of sufficiently advanced aliens crash land on Earth around 5,000 years ago and during the crash landing gain super human powers. When these aliens display these powers they are revered as gods. If you're familiar with Greek mythology you can tell which gods they're supposed to inspire. At least out of the Greek pantheon. As the comic goes along it shows that some of these aliens inspire more than one pantheon. Don't want to give a lot of major spoilers but one of the characters named Hurk does some things that from the issues I have read inspires not only Greek myth but two other mythologies as well.

Basically some thousands of years ago a group of what are essentially police, or the military, or military police are escorting some very dangerous criminals. As expected in a sci-fi action comic things go wrong and they all crash land on earth. The good aliens are called the "Ulympeans", so named because their ship was called the Ulympea. The criminals are called the "Tytans". Over the course of the story the Ulympeans and the Tytans will discover the nature of their powers and will go about using them not only to fight each other but to either help or harm the people of earth. Their actions will go on to inspire myths and legends.

The story has a nice and well balanced blend of action, humor and drama. The story isn't really dark, but can get somber without being melodramatic. The comedic moments are funny, and the action is far from boring. Especially with the powers these characters have.

Art


The art is very clean and vibrant. Nothing looks crudely drawn everything looks to not only be detailed but proportionate, this goes for the scenery as well as the characters. The colors are beautiful, personally they're what catch my eye the most. The colors always command my attention and I don't want feel like looking away from the page or feeling like the art is boring me. Vibrant pretty much is the word to use when describing the art. Thanks to the colors the world that all these characters live in feels alive.

Characters


The characters are what this story is all about and thankfully they're all interesting. Whether it be the strong and noble Hurk, the flirtatious jokester Hermaz or the captain with a heck of a complicated past Suras you will come to care about them and they won't feel boring. Which I have to say is a bit of an accomplishment with a cast as large as this usually some characters are bound to not feel as developed and interesting as others.

Verdict


If you're a fan of sci-fi and various mythologies of the ancient world, especially Greek, there really isn't any reason to not point your browser to this webcomic and start reading. The characters are likable, the art is great to look at and the story has some nice twists on the stories you've heard before.

Also if you're interested in picking up print versions of the comic if you don't want to always turn on whatever device you use to surf the internet with they have a nice store where you can do just that. You can find Wayward Sons here:

Wayward Sons gets a 9 out of 10.

If you want to follow me on twitter and know what I think of comics and everything in geekdom go to twitter.com/ikariradio

Also check out my podcasts The Ikaricast on iTunes and check out Morphin Bracers on rajionihon.ridersrangersandrambles.com

Lastly go to my deviantart where I take commissions, cheaply. fighterxaos.deviantart.com

Webcomic Review - Stealth

Well, readers of the Broken Infinite, I'm back again and this time I'm stepping away from mecha and countdowns to bring you a review. This week we're looking at volume 1 of the webcomic series Stealth by William Satterwhite.

Review by Jeremias de Leon


Story

Like any good superhero comic the first pages of the comic are all about setting up who the hero is. After a beat down of some street thugs the reader is shown glimpses of the hero  Allen White's high school life, how he got his powers and why he does what he does. His reasons for fighting crime are something I want to go into a little bit more right now. Allen's brother was a police officer who had no power and was dedicated to fighting crime that one day was murdered in the line of duty. Before this incident Allen already had his powers but did not use them to defend others. After realizing how dedicated his brother was to helping others and fighting crime even though he was a normal human Allen made a promise to his dead brother to use his power to do what his brother did.

This first volume of this webcomic is pretty much what I mentioned in the second sentence of the first paragraph. It shows Allen beating down evildoers, and goes into his personal life and relationships with other characters especially at his high school. During the volume though there's some story building with a record company executive named Mario Malone and his brother. By the end of the first volume you won't entirely know what's going on with the record company just that there's betrayals and a lot going on and none of it will be good for Allen.

Art


The first volume of Stealth seems to have been drawn traditionally, which isn't surprising, the website mentions that Stealth was actually started way back in 2001. It seemed like it when the art wasn't scanned in at too high of a resolution, which again, makes sense since it's being put on the web and not for print but perhaps the resolution was scaled a bit too far back for the first 3 issues of the first volume. The artwork seems a bit too blurry.

Other than that the style is actually great for this kind of story. It has a kind of noir feel to it and with the way the story was building up to be a crime drama with the record company executives and with the personal drama of Allen's school life.

Characters


The main character Allen White is a high school senior who seems to possess a genius level intellect. The comic states that he gets good grades, is in advanced classes and everyone seems to ask him for help on their schoolwork. He's also a very dedicated young man. He doesn't go through the motions when protecting people he honestly does want to make the city he lives in a better place. Also despite his teenage hormones affecting him and making him think about his high school crush he also seems to have his head on straight when it comes to crime fighting, he doesn't slack off and he never shows off. Something commendable for a comic hero at his age.

The girl that Allen likes Ashley Belle at first glance seems to just be a typical cheerleader but later on is quite more complicated than that and receives a lot of development.

Mario Malone the music executive and all the characters he's involved with are very interesting. I'd even say that you could take Stealth and his high school problems out and you'd be left with an interesting crime drama. Not that Allen himself isn't interesting.

Verdict

Whether it really is "the world's greatest superhero comic" I will leave to you. But it certainly is a good one. Some plot elements and dialog are a bit commonplace but overall it's still enjoyable.

I give Stealth an 8 out of 10

You can read Stealth here http://stealthcomic.com/

Under the Net

Under the Net with Jake Estrada

The Honor Brigade

Welcome to the 15^th edition of Under the Net.  

I will be rating the elements of the book on a scale of one through five.

One is poor, two is mediocre, three is fair, four is good, and five is excellent.

Hey, everyone. I hope everyone is doing well. Hopefully everyone is having a wonderful 4th of July and I figured since today is a day of celebration we should celebrate superheroes an American creation at its best!!

Today’s review is of a small comic that has had a history of being printed and is now being presented as a web comic series. The book is in full color, and it is worked on Tom Stillwell and Brad Bowers.

The team is compromised of:

Toy Boy: A former thief turned hero.

Lightning Rod: A guy born to failed heroes and out to redeem the family name.

S.U.I.T: A half human, half machine and quite pissed off all the time.

Mystery Girl: Like her name, she is a complete mystery!

Deadeye: A cop who happens to be a ghost trying to solve the biggest case of his life, his own murder!

 Here is the line up of the series.

I only was able to review 17 pages, so I will do what I can with that. J

The Art

The art is up to standard for a modern-day comic. The cover has a huge smiley face; it kind of reminded me of Watchmen. We are introduced to Toy Boy in the first issue. The comic is full color, and I will say the comic came off kind of odd to me, and the art was strange but up to standard. It flowed fine and I could understand what was going on. The lettering captured my interest more, and I will say that it was done nicely, it had those nice effects, and it was clear and crisp. 

ART: 3 STARS

The writing

The writing, well with the 17 pages I did review, it left some to be desired. However, I considered that this comic was originally a print comic. The flow and pattern of the characters flowed better as the series progressed, and it wasn’t originally designed to be a web comic so it had the normal padding and stretching of a plot to fill out. That is one of the major problems with modern comics, and it makes it harder to adapt some comics to web. I was interested in why Toy Boy was messing with the rent-a-cop. In fact, I thought it was just outright mean to test his skills out on a poor slob that was merely doing his job. I would say it was very non-hero like and rather pointless. After I felt that way, I had to reread the comic book pages about three times. It kind of confused me. At first, I felt it was someone that worked with him and his partner and he was just testing it on someone that was employed for him, and later I saw it was Toy Boy breaking into a place where one of his potential enemies was located. I only say this because he then left a message for the Rent-A-Cop to tell Conroy he was by to see him. This kind of left me scratching my head, but like I said, it is the nature of comics where most stories are padded out to fill the pages. Of course, I would like to know who the enemy was and what Toy Boy was about even if that meant he was out to get his enemy for stealing his flowers, but what I got here was some sort of message to be delivered. I will have keep an eye out for future pages to see how the story progresses.

WRITING: 3 STARS

Originality

The themes behind the book reminded me of a Teen Titans book, but the fact that it took about 17 pages to introduce Toy Boy and no one else, I can’t gauge the entire book with what I saw. I felt that Toy Boy being a former criminal now trying to be a hero also had this Thunderbolts vibe, but with Toy Boy messing around, showing off his skills, and then having a Rent-A-Cop take him down for a second, did make me laugh. I think having a hapless hero who is not that superhero-like all the time is quite nice.

ORIGINALITY: 3 STARS

The Pros

The lettering and effects are good. The book has a very polished, professional look to it.

The Cons

I wish the action was faster and that the overall plot was revealed to the reader much quicker, because if they are trying to gain more fans, well, they may not get them. Considering that this was a print comic before a web comic, one is not afforded reading the entire product how it was intended to be. I guess I could purchase the actual comic to read it to get the entire picture, but with what I read, I would wait until I read more before considering buying the title.

My Final Word

The comic is a fine comic. It has some of the basic trappings of other comics we all have seen. I would say give the book a try and see how you feel. It has good qualities to it, and I know I will continue to check back. I think it shows great promise, and I am considering that it was designed as a comic to give you the entire punch in one sitting and not at a page at a time in this piece meal fashion. I suspect it will get better because it is a long-running comic series. J

The comic updates here:

http://www.honorbrigadecomic.com/

Enjoy folks!

Jake Estrada

Email me at estradajake@yahoo.com for website suggestions. Thanks.

Jake Estrada is a published author who holds degrees in Multimedia Design and Criminal Justice. He is a father to three wonderful children and married to his beautiful wife, Beth. You can find his comics at http://graphicly.com/estrada-media and other fine online stores.

SILVER THORN # 1

SILVER THORN
Issue # 1,Volume 1
Rated R
July 2012

Created and Written by Frankie Rodriguez

All characters were created by Frankie Rodriguez. Any similarities of people are purely coincidental. Cover by DeAndra McFadden & Darryll B Carter! 


"HARSH SPRING, Part 1: The Blooming Time" 


Heiress Suites, Penthouse Floor
December 12th, 2011
Scion City, FL

         My name is Rose Tendou - Riley. I'm am a FBI agent. And my pussy is so wet right now, my shower would be jealous.

      Rose's brown hair was a nice contrast to her African American/Japanese features. Her skin was a warm carmel. Her body fit within her dress jacket and her leather slacks. Her shoes were stylish but practical, given there were currently the sounds and light of bullets around her. Rose looked to one of her teammates, a  Caucasian man named Kyle Matthews. His cropped brown hair easily seen as he empties his semi automatic. Bodies were on either side and between the 2 of them.

      Before you judge, allow me to say that I haven't had decent sex in the last two years. All that secret agent, James Bond shit, ain't real? Not for me anyway. Some people find that a little vulgar of me. But then, when you work with the FBI, you learn that the shit you'd find vulgar ain't really anything compared to what we see. 

   Rose ducks under another hail of bullets before she grips her own firearm. She aims, firing several rounds ... all but one meeting their mark, on 3 men that surrounded her main prey, a man with black hair, strong facial features,  wearing a navy suit coat with a vibrant royal blue shirt and jeans.

    The asshole that were behind the three men I just dropped is Cesar Monticello. Current second-in-command of the Monticello crime family. Been after this little asshole for years. He's got a hard on for me cause one ... I rejected any sexual advances he made towards me; and two ... I put his brother in jail nearly a year ago. But hey . ..  he and his brother were involved in a mass drug traffic scam for a brand new drug called Trinity.And testing it on high school and junior high kids. Kinda hate that shit.

   Cesar and four other men shoot another barrage of bullets at the two FBI agents. Cesar and his men stopped for a moment. "You fuckin' cunts! You got my big brother in jail and stopped us from making a lot of money. Come out of there!!"

   Cesar and his men shoot another barrage of bullets. Rose and Kyle kept themselves behind two large pillars. Kyle looks at Rose.

   "You know Tendou ... you know how to show a guy a great time!"

   Rose chirped back, "Must be cause I don't put out on the first few dates!"  She shot three shots from her current firearm then dropped it. She looks down.

   Ugh! I hate this shit. But a woman's gotta do what she's gotta do. Taking weapons from the dead would be wrong in the eyes of some but expected in others. And I want to live.

   Rose quickly grabs two blood soaked guns from two dead men and begin to unload their rounds, taking down another of Cesar's men while Kyle takes down another with a head shot.

    Nice to know that Kyle can pull his weight. And with two more down, we're about to . . .

 Another seven men pour into the room behind Cesar with more weapons. The new hail of bullets struck, slicing past Kyle's arm.

   get fucked! And while I feel bad for Kyle's, his stubborn ass won't say it hurts. Still ... this turns me on. The danger. The Risk. And the sweet reward once we take down a bad guy. It's ... it's like I am having an orgasm every second for the next hour, each one better than the last. And the RUSH ... dear God ... this rush is incredible. This is why I mentioned that I am leaking like a shower head. And wait till I take down Cesar!

Kyle and Rose take down a man a piece but there are simply too many men as they move in. Rose and Kyle turn back after shooting at their attacks, glancing at each other.

  "Tendou. I'm sorry," shouted Kyle.

   Rose replied, "What for? We're not dead yet."

   "Kinda gonna be cause ... I'm out of ammo," Kyle replied.

   "Oh joy. I am almost done myself," Rose said as she looked around. "Any radio contact from Rave?"

   "No. This might be it for us . Listen Tendou . . . if anything happ . .."

   Rose held up a hand. "If you start with that last words shit again .. . I will personally use one of my last bullets to shoot you in the ass."

   Cesar held up an arm. "They're out of bullets. Move in. Let's finish this."

   Cesar and his goons were closing in and me and Kyle were pretty fucked at this point. I go over in my mind all the techniques my dad taught me. Yet, it would also mean lasting long enough to dodge bullets. And Kyle doing the same. Shit. Why can't we get a last minute . ..

  Suddenly, the doors opened behind them with SWAT and other FBI agents in full gear coming in with guns ablazing. One of the other FBI agents went over to Rose, his blonde hair gave way to his blue eyes that looked her over.

    "Tendou ... you okay?"

    "Nice to see you too Parker. I owe you a round of shots after this," Rose answered with a hint of a smile."Just don't take so long next time."

   "We told you and Matthews to wait," Parker replied. "But I'll take that round."

 Another agent looks over Matthews as the others are in a fire fight. During the ensuing fire fight, Cesar and two of his men followed him out the door his reinforcements came in from.

  "Fuck!" Rose gripped a new gun provided by Parker. "Where the hell does Cesar thinks he's going?"

   Rose began to shoot as she closed in towards the doors to follow Cesar. Parker and Matthews continued to fire as they watched her go.

  "What the hell," Parker exclaimed as his bullets struck down another of Cesar's men.

  Kyle sighed as he simply began to run after her. Parker yelling profanities as the two agents went on their own . .. again.

 Rose hand her gun out as she was quickly going down the hallway. Kyle was slowly coming up behind her, making sure he wasn't followed by anyone that was not the law. Right before he caught up to Rose, he stared at a barrel of a gun.

   Rose gripped the gun. :"What the hell are you doing? Fall back."

  "And miss the chance to get Cesar or hear you brag how you took him down alone? No thanks," replied Kyle.

Suddenly, the two men with Cesar popped from either side of a group of large doors.

  These two are getting annoying as all fuck.

  Rose quickly ducks for a moment then charges at them, gliding past bullets over head as she starts to kick. away the two mobsters' guns. Rose gives a hard fist to one guy's side while she elbowed the other. Rose ducked under a fist as she headbutted her assailant.

"Matthews ...move your ass. Get Cesar. This should take a minute," she commented. Matthews raced paced her as she was snapping the neck of the other assailant.

    Matthews raced inside to see an empty room with another massive door just ahead of him. Rose knocked out the other attacker as she wanted into the main penthouse living room.

  I ran in to join Matthews as he was about to open another big door. Yet as his hand was touching the door, I felt cold prickling sensations up and down my neck. I felt like I had seen this before. And I have. Mostly in movies. My eyes widened as I yell while standing next to a sofa. It was too late . ..


BOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!

 Much too late.



In the Dark
Unknown Place
Unknown Time


       I feel ... it. I feel . ..  my god. What is ... happening? I feel someone ... their tongue. Why can't move ...feel muscles. Strong ... firm. Wow. Whoever this is ... is incredible. Their ...their touch ...Uah.
 Oh my god. Never ... never felt so ... so gooooooooooood. What ...why do I feel .... Oh my God! OH MY GOD!!!

      "Since you . .."

   I can't make out all the words. Feels like ... so disjointed ... but God, it has never felt so GOOD!

  "" . . . periments, I will . ..  you."

    Whoever this is ... please God, don't let  them stop. I can feel every kiss. Every touch. Every last thrust. I feel it all and my body feels like it's singing. Ah.

  " ... seeds will grown within you."

    Suddenly, it feels like my body is ... AH ... the pain! Yet ... the pleasure ... it's overwhelming. Oh ... oh! O-!



Kelsey Crusher Hospital, Room 541
July 4th, 2012
Condor Falls, NV

    The sun had beamed into the room after a quick zip removed blinds from their place. a woman with long brownish aurburn hair stood over a sleeping Rose. Her skin was slightly lighter than Rose's but her eyes were similar. With a sigh, the woman sits on a chair next to Rose while gripping her hand. Rose's hand and mouth have tubes in it. Her hair matted and combed, Rose lied still as the woman spoke.

 "It's been over six months, nee-chan. Six months since the explosion. After everything that happened, you are starting to look better now than you did before the explosion." Rose's sister, Jasmine took a soulfully long breath. "It took nearly 5 months till the agency would let me see you.Parker told me that they had moved you to a few different hospitals before settling her 3 months back. They wanted to make sure to keep you alive after . . ."

   Jasmine took a free hand to wipe the tear coming from her eye. "You know, I don't know how you felt. If you felt any of it at all. They showed me all the burns. The cuts. What ... You are lucky to have survived. If you call this surviving."

 Jasmine gripped her sister's hand tighter. "Shit Rose. This ain't you. This whole ... comatose, laying on the bed shit isn't you. Sure, you were a bit lazy growing up . . ."

  "And as an adult too," called out Parker as he walked in with another guy; a larger, bear of a man with dark brown skin and greenish brown eyes with glasses on. "Crane and I wanted to see how she was holding up and the usual sweep."

Jasmine dried her eyes."I appreciate it Parker but next time knock."

Crane murmured under his breathe, "Yep. Definitely her sister."

 "What was that Crane?" snapped Jasmine.

 Crane nervously replied, " Ah ... nothing. How are you? Any change in Rose."

Jasmine has placed one finger up, planning to verbal evisceration of Crane but Parker stepped in between them. "Seriously, Jasmine, we'd like to know."

  "No real change. She's healed. She's healed from just about everything," she stated as she looked back at Rose. "Whatever healing she's been doing, it's helped her immensely."

  "She had burns, broken bones, spinal damage ... and you say she's all better?" Parker inquired, finding it hard to believe that Rose could recover from such dangerous injuries.

  Crane added, "I knew she was healing well but I am still surprised that she's healed from all that. Spinal damage too."

  "The doctor's originally said that she'd need several operations on her spine alone. I was told by the doctors's that she'd recover in time but all better?"

  Jasmine chimed," Parker, they were saying her spine somehow realigned itself to the point she doesn't need another surgery. Yet, what I want to know is that ... if she is all better. When will she wake up?"

  Parker and Crane just paused, Crane putting his head down. A doctor walked in with dirty blonde hair and some blue and white heals.She came into the room.

  "Mr. Parker, Ms. Tendou. And ... " the doctor paused, looking towards Parker and Jasmine.

  "Go ahead. He's been visiting and he's got the clearance," Parker stated.

 Jasmine chirped, "Not from me. If this was a civilian in the hospital . .. "

  "But she's not a civilian.  She's FBI. Let's not get into that here Jasmine," Parker replied.

  Jasmine pointed a finger right at Parker as her voice spat frustration. "This is MY sister in my bed. Don't you dare tell me I do not have a say on who has access to my sister after you assholes kept her from me and my family for months."

  Crane began to step back. "I can go .. ."

  "No," Parker cut off. "You are fine."

  "If you are gonna all carry on, I will throw you all out of this hospital," the doctor stated, hoping her threat would calm down the people in the room.

   Jasmine hissed, "You even try it, I will have your career and the careers of every member of your family till I am dead and buried."

   Parker added, "And you would be impeding federal officers from doing their business. Which will land you in jail. So, I suggest you don't try us."

  Crane threw up his arms. "Do  you both have to be so damn stubborn. The lady is just trying to do her job!"

  Parker and Jasmine glanced at each other than back at the doctor. Crane sighed as he looked at the doctor, "Go ahead, Dr . . .?"

  "Grimes. And believe me, I will be putting in complains and getting my lawyer for this.But before all that, my  patient seems to have been healing remarkably. Any spine damage that was left after the first operation had seemingly healed itself. Burns, skin ... no real markings. It is as if her body's immune system got a boost cause she didn't even need skin graphs and their are no real signs of scarring."

 Jasmine took a small sigh of relief as Parker and Crane both seem surprised by the doctor's words. Parker asked, "How is it possible? I thought that she would need the spinal operations and she had some scarring last I was here a month ago."

  "The treatments she has been receiving have helped her so very much. Maybe it is a miracle but she is turning around nicely," Dr. Grimes stated.

Crane gave a small smile as Jasmine just glanced at her. "That is all well and good. And even I have to admit, she looks great. But what the hell is up with her that she can't wake up?"

  Dr. Grimes stopped for a moment. "Well ... at the end of the day, I think the mental trauma of all what happened must have her trapped in her own head. Or maybe there are issues with the brain we still need to examine but from all accounts, she should not be in a coma now."

  After Dr. Grimes said those words, the two FBI agents and Rose's sister all turned to look at the fallen agent, wondering why won't she wake up.



Kaleidoscope Night Club, main office on top floor
July 4th, 2012
Glitztown Section of Scion City, FL

     Within a section of the city stands a large, oval shaped building with large spotlights on it. It is Kaleidoscope; the most popular night club in the state of FL and one of the most well known nightclubs from around the world. The rich, the famous, the poor yet hungry ... all gather under the banner where you can see the pecking order but pretend you are part of it ... for the right price. Past the multiple floors, bars, tvs, dancers and bartenders, you get to the top 3 floors. While many storage and dressing rooms are on the last two floors, the very top floor holds the large main office/deluxe apartment setting for the manager of Kaleidoscope, Ren Pizzimenti. Ren sats comfortably with two naked women around him when he heard the door open.

   Cesar Monticello, one of the clubs main owners, walks in with five men and three women of his own with him. Ren rummaged his hand through his brown hair as he got up and hugged Cesar.

  "Ah. So good to see ya, cuz. Happy Independence Day!"

  Ren and Cesar ended their hug as Cesar looked around. "Nice to see business is booming as always."

 "Are you kidding? I had to turn away former child stars tonight. We got this place hopping, cuz," Ren said as he went over to the table then sniffed the already set lines of cocaine from it.

 Cesar walked towards the nearest window, gazing at the fireworks that were popping all over the sky over the shoreline. He turned back to his cousin.

"Not much for chit-chat at the moment, Ren. What's been our sales tonight?"

  Ren played with his white coated nose for a minute, wiping away the coke as he came up to Cesar. Ren snapped his fingers and a large, husky man came in with a silver briefcase. The man opens it to reveal a score of bills.

  "Nearly over a million in Trinity sales tonight. Fuckin ' fiends love it. Keep tellin' me that they love it. Never had a drug so good they said," Ren directed as the man with the briefcase gave it to one of Cesar's men.

Cesar's eyes quickly shifted, glaring at Ren. "You didn't take any of the shit, right?"

  "What? Trinity? Nah. Not yet but .. . " Ren started when Cesar immediately cut him off.

 "Never take the junk, you hear me? Never take Trinity."

   Ren's face folded in confusion. "But why not?"

 Then, one of the women Ren was playing with before Cesar walked in, came over and said, "Why not? It's really fucking fun. Especially during sex."

Ren and Cesar looked at the woman. Her hair was matted in some places, wild like fire in others. Her eyes had dark black holes that seemed to be sucking her eyes in and her body seemed to be too skinny as her ribs were easily seen while her mouth was white.

Cesar merely takes his arm and slaps the woman away. The woman lands on the floor with a big bump and beings to laugh hysterically. "This is why I don't want you do it. The junk makes you go cookoo."

Another of the women come over to them and kneels by the girl."Leave her alone. She ain't do nothing to you." After saying those words, Cesar turned to one of his men then gave a nod.

  A tall man with a mustache came and picked up the woman helping the other woman on the ground. Cesar quickly grabbed a needle from  the table while another of his men came out with a vial of thick, crimson red liquid. Cesar drenched the needle in, taking in enough till the needle was fool. The woman held by the man in the mustache was fighting to get free when Cesar came over to her.

   " Sweetie . . . in this family, you learn to shut up when the big boys are talkin.' Since you feel we're being so unfair to the chick, you can join her!" Cesar's words ended with him stabbing a needle of Trinity directly into the defiant woman. She went from clawing at the sky to dropping like a ton of bricks onto the ground. She began to cunvulse as she began to foam at the mouth while shaking.

    Ren smirked, "" You feel it babe. Yeah ... the pain. Ah the lovely, blissful pain that you're in. Almost makes me wish I was you right now."

   The woman began to scream with drool and foam falling from her lips. Ren picks up the first woman who was struck down earlier. "Daphne ....see what you did. Your girl might not live through the first two rounds. Trinity shot up like that ... with that much ... hahaha."

   The woman, now feeling the affects of the overdose of the drug called Trinity, was stretching out as her body felt nothing but waves and waves of pain. Then, within second, she began to scream, clawing away at her own skin.

   "She made it to the second round. The delusions. Ah ... whatever is in her pretty head must frighten the fuck outta her, " Ren smirked.

  As the Daphne, Ren and the other mobsters watched the woman cutting away at her own skin, a cellphone rang. Cesar went into his pocket and picked it up. Within seconds, Cesar ended the call with a smirk on his face.

  Cesar chimed in, "Looks like this is gonna be my favorite holiday after all."

  Ren asked as the woman continued to scream with part of her arm's muscles now exposed from her tearing her own skin, "Why's that?"

  "Simple. They finally found my lost little flower," Cesar smiled as he went over and took a drink. He turned to his men. "Get your  sun screen gents . .. we're going to Nevada."

   Ren inquired, "Hitting Vegas? I thought Sammy West said ..."

  "Fuck Sammy West and his gang of bitches. Not going there anyway. Looks like I'm gonna be taking a trip to Condor Falls. Happy Fourth of July cuz!" Cesar smiled as the woman on the floor stopped screaming painfully ... and changed to euphoric moaning.


FBI -Scion City Division, the old Scion Herald Building
July 7th, 2012 
Scion City, FL

     Right on a stretch of beach that has a boardwalk, the only Scion City Herald building stands. Inside it, the FBI special division has set up base inside, using the facilities as needed. Inside a conference room, division head, Derrick Chambers steps inside with some papers in hand. Sitting in sides around the conference room are four other agents; a long black haired beauty named Erin Baxter; a short, black haired guy by the name of Victor  Negron; Parker and Crane. Derrick folded his arms, waiting for his crew to stop talking before he starts.

    "You know, I can cut your salaries a little more if you want to keep wasting time," Chambers barked.

 Parker chimed, "I  think we're good."

   Everyone focused on Chambers. " Good to see things working out. Anyway, we got word that the Monticello's have been moving more and more Trinity. So much so that they damn near sold out of it  during the 4th."

  Erin sighed, "Bloody fuckin' kids."

 "Not just the kids, Baxter. It would be easier if it was just the kids. No . .. we got everyone from junior high kids to well know celebrities to even some politicians who got a piece of this latest shipment. We are gonna need to up game and make some big moves soon," sternly proclaimed Chambers.

 Victor stated, "Our intel gave us that much but let me guess, no supplier yet huh?"

"There have been hints of two major suppliers. One you know real well, Erin. Lucien Winters," said as he looked directly at Erin to see her reaction.

Erin grimaced at the mention of  Winters. "That son of a bitch. I was hoping he'd be smart enough to die before I catch him."

  Parker asked, "So, you've got history?"

  "Boy do they ever," started Crane."Sees as if Winter's went from being a small fry to a big one within a year, killing anyone that was his competition and Baxter her went undercover and . .. "

   Crane stopped when he noticed  Erin's eyes making daggers towards him. "I'mma shut up now."

 "Please do before you force me to shoot you," Erin stated with a grim calm.

  "What the fuck did I sign up for?" Victor jokingly asked when Chambers cleared his throat. The rest of the group turned their attention to him.

   "Anyway, we got another issue. Cesar's been quiet since yesterday. He's only been seen around town a couple times till he went to the airport about 30 minutes ago," Chambers said, as puts down the file. Pictures of Cesar and some men slipped out.

    Victor chimed, "Well, if Cesar's gone, all we gotta do is take down Lorenzo ..."

  "No! We don't have enough to pin Lorenzo to anything at the moment. We'd be tipping our hand," Chambers walked around the room as the rest of the team examined the photos.

  Parker gave a simple question as he looked up at one picture. "So where is he going?"

 Chambers looked to Crane. Crane simply brought up his new hand-held touchscreen computer as he tapped it a couple of times. This is eyes flashed with worry.

   "Um . . .he's going to Nevada."

   "Oh my god," Parker started.

  Erin added, "Then he must have found her."

  "How?" Crane started, "We've been so damn tight lipped about this."

   Victor raised his hand, as if he was in school. "Tight lipped about what? What's going on?"

  "Victor, we only mentioned it a couple times but one of our members has been kept hidden for the last 7 months in order to protect her and heal. Cause she had Cesar dead to rights before what happened went down," Erin stated.

   " Why am I only hearing about this now? I've been here for like 3 months."

Chambers simply answered, "Cause you didn't need to know yet. Now you do."

  "I'll be on the first flight to . . ." Parker said as he stood up.

  "The hell you are Parker. Crane and Baxter can ..." Chambers started.

 Parker replied, "I was there, Chambers. I was there when it happened. I only got a few scratches but she and Kyle . ... please."

  Parker and Chambers stared at each other for a full minute till Chambers chuckled. "You are a stubborn son of a bitch. You and Baxter go. Crane, since you are staying here with Negron, catch him up and start finding some leads to Cesar's supplier." Crane and Negron stood up and left the room. Chambers turned to Parker and Erin. "Get there, get Rose and get her out. Make it quick and as quiet as possible."

  "And what if we are facing down Cesar?" Erin inquired.

  "Then he should duck cause I will put a bullet in his head if he so much as touches Rose," Parker's words will full of confidence without a single hint of hesitation.

  Chambers chuckled again. "Well, you heard him. Get on the nearest jet and beat that bastard to her."

Parker nods and he and Erin run out of the room.



Kelsey Crusher Hospital, Room 541
July 7th, 2012
Condor Falls, NV


         Oh my god. What ...what am I seeing? The sky. The sky looks so beautiful. The purples ... the reds. Wait ... the stars. What is this?! What the fuck is going on? I can smell ... sulfur. Three moons? Who the hell is writing this dream? Why do I feel so ... warm? God, I feel ... the wind. And I see . .. I see ..

   It's face was round and purple. It's two eyes farther apart then humans. It hand, with only three fingers, rested on Rose's brow.

     WHAT THE FUCK IS . . .?!

  Rose wakes up from her hospital bed, gasping for air as cold sweat rained on her brow. Rose quickly looks around to her surrounding, with her vision slightly blurred. She rubs her eyes and looks around.

  Where the hell am I?

  Rose turns to her left as she sees a dozen roses with a small card. She takes the card and raises it to her face. She quickly reads the print:

    Rose,

          I love you honey.Hope you wake up soon. Daddy and I miss you.


                                               Love your little sister,

                                                    Lillie


           P.S. Jassie's been on a fuckin' rampage since what happened. Please wake up if only to calm her down.

    "What the hell happe . . ."

   Flashes of memories fill her head. She sees her in a gun fight. Then she sees millions of stars. She sees Kyle going with her after Cesar. Then her head fills with thoughts of a weird silver substance dancing around her. She sees Kyle going in after Cesar as she kicks a guy in the face. She sees the weird purple-hued being. Then it all fades to white.

       "What the fuck?" I ... I was in an explosion. Dear God. Kyle. What happened to him? What happened to me?

    Rose quickly began to feel her face, her hair and even the rest of her body. Okay. Everything feels like it's okay.  Rose glances at her breasts and stomach. Oh wow ... they are definitely okay. I feel lighter too. Shit, I need to get blown up more often. Looks like I lost 10 to 15 pounds. God, Jasmine is gonna be so jealous. Still, I need to find out what happened and what's going on. I'd like to know where I am too. 

  Rose takes a minute to look around the room. She steps on her feet, feeling the cold floor on her toes. Awww . .. someone was nice enough to give me a pettie.  Rose glanced at the room and found a discarded newspaper. The Condor Times . . .. July 4th ...

  "2012?! What in the hell? Oh ... I need someone to explain this to me. I been knocked out for seven months?!"

   As Rose saw the nurse's button on a remote, a nurse walked into the room. She was carrying some white roses into the room. She looked at Rose amazingly.

   "You're ... you're awake! And you're standing up!"

  Rose replied to the nurse, "And walking around. Why am I in . . ." glanced at the newspaper again and looked back at the nurse, "Condor Falls, Nevada? Why is it seven months later? What happened to me?"

  The nurse nervously tilted her head. "Well, you should really talk to the doctor about that. Did you ... um ... just get up?"

  "Yeah. And I am sore. But please ... give me some basics, girl. Like, when did I get here? What happened to Kyle? And please ... if you know who gave me my pettie ... let me thank them. My feet never looked better."

 The nurse sighed, "You know ... there was a lot of people worried about you. You coming all the way from Scion City and all."

  "Well, yeah. Which is one of the reasons why I am weirded out by this. So, if you don't mind filling in the blanks," Rose asked as she turned to the close door. She opened it to see the mirror. As her hand went through her hair, Rose kept her eyes on the nurse.

   "Well, you see, after the explosion, they ended up bringing you here to fix you up," the nurse said. "Still, you look great."

  "I know. I thought most coma patients suffer atrophy if they  are under too long," commented Rose.

The nurse began to fiddle with the bouquet of white roses. "Normally yes. But your recovering is nothing short of ... miraculous."

  "I know, right?" Rose said as she finished her hair. Rose stood there, touching her stomach for a moment.

The nurse dropped the white rose to reveal a gun with a silencer. Rose smirked as the nurse talked. "You should have stayed asleep, bitch. Cesar sends his love."

As the nurse emptied two shoots at her, with a blinding speed that defiled logic, Rose flipped over the bullets as they shattered her mirrors and inbeded themselves into the closet and wall. Rose landed behind the nurse then rammed her elbow into the back of her assassin. Rose then kicked away the gun. With a quick twirl, Rose's left foot smashed into the face of the faux-nurse, breaking her nose. Rose smiled.

  Damn! I am on fire. Like I never was ... asleep.

 The assassin fell hard on the ground as Rose stood over her. The assassin reached out to the gun ahead of her but Rose pulled her up by her hair.

   "Okay bitch. Where's Cesar?"

  The assassin laughed."Doesn't matter bitch. You aren't leaving Condor Falls alive."

 Rose laughed back at her attacker. Then proceeded to kick her face to the floor; knocking the assassin out.

  "Says the chick who just got knocked out."

Rose immediately picked up the gun then began to examine her assassin for any clues.

   Okay. The id's probably fake. She was fairly convincing her job but she was stupid. Anyway, can't worry about that now. Knowing Cesar, he's probably near by, to make sure that I'm dead. Ah ... the men in my life. Still ... I lost seven months of my life and none of the team is here. I need to contact them.Damn! No cell on her. She was smart enough for that.



Rose was quickly checking the gun when two doctors came in; Doctor Grimes and a male doctor with a sharp jaw and blue eyes. Doctor Grimes' eyes were wide while the male doctor seemed to smirk at Rose.

   "Oh my god! You're awake." Doctor Grimes looked at the ground and found the nurse on the ground. "Wait! What happened?"

   The male doctor asked, "What are you doing young woman with that gun?"

  "Protecting myself," Rose said as she held up the gun at the two doctors. "I want to see id. And I want to see it now."

  "Young woman," the male doctor stated, "I think we can come to an understanding but you need to put down that gun and let us examine you."

 "I think you can kiss  my ass and tell me what i want to know," Rose barks back.

 "Miss, we will get the police and have you ..." the young male doctor started.

  "Asshole ... last I checked, I am an FBI agent for the United States of 'fuckin' America. I outrank any police in the state! Now ... I want some answers or . ."

  The male doctor yelled back, "Or you'll shoot us? Committing murder will land you in prison, FBI or not."

Grimes fearfully replied, "She just wants some answers.Let's give her the answers the best we can!"

  "Don't be so damn weak," the male doctor said.

 "Um ... I'm the one with the gun, remember doc?" Rose exclaimed.

 The male doctor quickly pulled out a gun from his pocket and began to shoot at Rose. Rose easily sidestepped the bullet to plug too bullets into the Male doctor. Just as the Male doctor fell dead, one bullet left his gun.The bullet ripped through Rose's shoulder but the woman did not move.

 The bullet went clean through and Rose felt the hot pressure from the newly made hole. Yet, before Rose can touch her new wound . . .

  What the . . .? Why do I feel cool all of a sudden?

   Silver liquid material began to secret from her shoulder, cauterizing the bullet hole. Within seconds, the bullet hole was no more. Grimes and Rose took a moment to look at each other then back at her shoulder.

  "What the hell did you do to me?" Rose exclaimed in slight horror.

 Grimes looked and went from fearful to smiling. "Enough of this flesh suit." Grimes' skin began to rip and tear. But instead of blood revealing itself, yellowish good dripped from the breaks till purple skin was revealed. The flesh of Doctor Grimes simply dropped and suddenly, a purple skinned being stood reveal.

   Holy shit! It's like that creature in my dreams! What the fuck is going on?!

  Grimes spoke with a slightly deeper voice. "Seems that the experiment is a success. Yes."

  "Screw your experiment." Rose emptied the clip on the being. She did not care about what significance it was of what she was seeing in front of her. She did not care how special this being might be. The gun was empty with the barrel smoking but the bullets seemed to have little effect on Grimes.

Grimes opened forth her arms and suddenly, Rose was blasted by a mysterious force that knocked her up against the wall. Rose slipped into the ground as Grimes approached her.

   "I am so happy that you finally woke up. It was getting so boring and bothersome to be within that flesh and bones this whole time. Now ... to take you to the Q'in base. Ta'lys will want to see you."

 Rose's head had stood down as she was collecting her thoughts.

   So ... I have lost seven months of my life. And during that time, I ended up in Nevada, got some kind of alien experiment done to me and Cesar is still after me. And this bitch thinks I am just gonna come quietly.

  From Rose's eyes, the silver liquid began to fall straight down from them, running down her cheeks.

   She's wrong! Dead fuckin' wrong!

 Rose's stomach began to leak a little as her robe was now partial covered, as was her shoulder and left arm. The silver liquid had move like vines around arm to create an armor covering around it. Slight barb stuck up, like thorns to a rose.Rose's hair had gone from its brown to a brilliant rose red. Rose stood up.

Dear God ... that hurt like fuck but felt a little good too.

 "Sweetie! If you want me to go with you ... you are gonna have to beat me. And I will tell you right now, that ain't happening!" Rose stood down, with part of her stomach and her left arm and shoulder partially armored up while more silver liquid seemed to be making down her legs.And now . .. her ultimate destiny was about to begin.


TO BE CONTINUED . . .


NEXT: Parker & Erin arrive to the hospital as it becomes a warzone. Cesar Monticello, his man and the mysterious Grimes all want Rose but what happens when this flower fights back. Find out next month.